In My Heart, In My Soul (Preview)

I've told you guys about a new song I'm working on called "In My Heart, In My Soul". This is a pretty promising concept in my opinion and, as promised, I've uploaded a small preview to Youtube and Myspace! :D

I think it's important you guys tell me what I have to do to improve this small piece you've heard.. I know it isn't a lot, but whatever comes to mind, just tell me (in a polite way..) :)

This song has a huge potential to make its way on to the new album..

Enjoy!